Friday, March 22, 2013

Narrative Dog Surfing

How was your day?

Slip, Slip, Slip.........
"ewww,yuck" Emily yelled
"woof,woof" Milo barked.
Emily's dog (milo) was ready with his surf board. Emily jumped straight up and got ready for the dog annual surfing day. Tiredly walking to the beach Emily body was weak. As she was holding on the leash Milo was pulling because the show was about to start. Emily ran and ran until she fell on to the seats. "BEEEEPPP" the buzzer went the dogs were on there way.

Across the clashing waves the dogs were surfing with all there might. As Emily looked she yelled out "GO MILO, YOU CAN DO IT?". Suddenly she heard the girl named Molly (Bullies Emily at school) next to her say "my dog is obviously going to win, because we practice everyday".

"Umm excuse me you just can't say that your dog is going to win instantly just because you both practice everyday. Those other dogs can beat your dog". Moments later she couldn't see Milo he wasn't with the rest of the dogs. Emily quickly ran down the steps and told the host that one of the dogs were missing. The host asked what was the dogs number, she told him the number was 7.

Suddenly all you can see is Milo barking and coming down the waves. Emily was relieved. Molly's dog came around Milo and drowned him. Emily quickly took her clothes off and jumped into the sea. She swam and swam until she finally made it, breathing heavily she couldn't find Milo anywhere. She dived underneath still nothing. "Help" yelled Emily. While she was screaming for help on shore Molly's dog won. All the lifeguards, jumped in for help and rescued Milo on the beach. Emily quickly put him in the car and took him to the vet.

Waiting for hours, the vet told Emily that Milo was all right and that he should have a rest. They both went home, Emily was delighted that Milo was still alive. Suddenly as she was going to put her leg up on the sofa the door rang. 'DING DONG', the man that hosted the dog annual surfing day gave Emily the trophy. Emily asked why he had given it to her, and he said because you are a big brave girl.


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