Thursday, July 11, 2013
Use this template to construct a reflection about your week making your Fairytale Move.
Post this table on your blog.
The good things that our group loved was cooperating together and having fun. Also putting a great movie together. We enjoyed making a storyboard about our twisted fairy tale stories that we had written. We also enjoyed giving each others ideas to make our Trailer better.
The thing that we didn’t like was when other people distract us when we were doing our work.
The thing that our group learned was learning acting and putting the movie together fast and good.
P - Positive - The good things
M - Minus - The not so great things
I - Interesting - The things I learnt and I can do better on next time.
Monday, July 8, 2013
The sun was up and the sky was clear, Jack woke up and got changed. As he looked at his mother he knew she was getting very sick. So Jack went out for a stroll along the banks in the forest with his cow. He had to trade his cow to get some pennies from the farm. As he was walking along he saw a man named Mike wearing a long coat. Mike gave Jack three beans to swap for the cow. So Jack took it and went back home, to tell his mother the good news. But when he showed his mother she was very angry. At night time Jack planted the seeds and waited till the next morning.
Jack woke up with a big stretch and a loud growl. He quickly jumped out of bed and ran outside like a little mouse. WOW! Jack said with a surprising face, the three beans now have been turned into a giant beanstalk that went straight through the top of the clouds in the sky. A while later Jack heard a big horn blowing and this only meant one thing, someone was missing. Jack hopped onto his horse and rode it all the way to the castle, he asked the king who’s missing your majesty” and he replied back “My Daughter”
Jack goes to rescue the kings daughter. Then Jack climbs the beanstalk and he could see trolls and a gigantic cloud with a large castle on it. Jack then sees big disgusting trolls, he sees a little door that is a secret entrance into the castle. So Jack sneaks into the castle and he sees a big giant foot right in front of his face. he looks up and and then sees a giant troll.
On the side of the castle he then sees the princess in a wooden cage where she can not free herself. Then he goes “shh shh”, she looks down and says “what are you doing here? go away!”, Jack replies “I’m here to rescue you”.
So Jane tells him where the key is to unlock the cage, but it is on a necklace that the troll is wearing. He is the king troll and his name is toby. So Jack climbs the trolls clothes and finds the key. The troll was sleeping, when Jack tugs on his clothes the Troll wakes up and see’s Jack. But the troll thinks that Jack is an insect and just brushes him off. As Jack is brushed off he he grabs the key, unlocks the cage and free’s the princess.
But when they go out the door they bump into a shield and makes a big sound. Then the troll woke up and they were running, but suddenly the troll catches them and swallows them up. However they dodge his teeth and slide down his throat and land in his stomach.
There was a whole village living in his stomach.
The village asked “Who are you?”, The princess replied “I am princess Jane”
Then Jack asked “how do we get out of here” Then they replied “there’s no way out”
So They use the bones from people and animals that the troll has eaten and built a house.
Then Jack asked Jane if she wanted to marry him in a trolls stomach, Jane replied yes and they had their wedding in the trolls stomach. Then they had a party in the trolls heart and had a disco.
Jack and Jane lived happily ever after in the trolls disgusting body.
Monday, July 1, 2013
Joshua Iosefo came to our Literacy class. We had an experience with Joshua about spoken word. We had to write a piece of a story about what we want to say to the world.
The Scribble Story
I could see a curved line, also an R and a Hash-tag at the end. To me I seriously don't know, what this is???
What I want to say to the world?
I think that the prime minister shouldn't take people's homes because people are starting to live in the streets. The prime minister should really take care of his people in New Zealand. I don’t want the world to be like this. I want the world to be more peaceful. I don’t want people dying for us in Afghanistan. I also want them to settle down and talk, through this situation that's making us have this war. Come on and lets get up and make the world more peaceful!!