Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Superhero Girl

Hi my name is Superhero Girl. I have super strength that makes people happy. My mum told me that I was a superhero. I was excited! I dreamed to be a superhero it was all I wished for. My Mum gave her strength to me because she was getting too old. I love my costume I wear stockings, t-shirt and boots. People think I'm evil but I'm not. I'm good just like my mum.

My villain is Volcano boy and I have to put him in my secret jail place with all the bad people. I am 10 years old and I go to Point England. I have learned my super powers fast. While I was doing my homework I heard a stupendous bang and I also heard people yelling ‘Superhero girl HELP!” I was frightened that my people were hurt. I got up and spun to change into my costume. I went outside and it was Volcano boy. He always picks on us and he said ‘’I am going to destroy this planet and it would mine forever," then he laughed weakly.

So then the battle began. We were the most powerful superhero’s on earth. We fought and fought. Until I took a big fist to volcano boy and he fall onto the ground. I told all the people to hold on to me because he was going to blow up. Then “BOOM” the people were frightened.

From that day on we lived forever and no troubles came and families were happy.


Miss K said...

Hey Turuhira, Nice picture and fabulous story! You must have had some great teachers recently. ;-0
You've paragraphed your story so well and I love your exciting language that you have used.
Can't wait to read the next one.
Miss King

Turuhira said...

Thank you for your comment Miss King it was wonderful.

Lisa May said...

Hi Turuhira! My name is Lisa and I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Mobile,Alabama. I loved reading your story! My favorite part was that you said you had super strengths to make people happy! And, that you got it from your mum! I bet you are really good at making people smile, if you tell stories like this all the time! And, the costume is awesome!
I wish everyone wanted the super hero strength to make people happy! Wouldn't this world be a much greater place! I can't wait to read about your next adventure!

Anonymous said...

Hi Turuhira

I really like your picture.I also liked it how you yoused super strength to make people happy.But any ways keep up the hard work.

Brittni said...

Hey Turuhira!
My name is Brittni Sasser. I am at student at the University of South Alabama and I am majoring in Elementary Education. I was assigned to post on your blog this week! Your “Superhero Girl” story is awesome! I like that your super strength is making people happy. I am very impressed that you are 10 years old and are writing stories like this one. Also, it is great that you are able to post a picture to your blog. I looked around your blog at some of the other things you have posted and your posts look very good. Keep up the good work! I also have a blog with some of my work. If you would like to look at my blog please do!

Great job!

andrea said...

Wow id like to be an super hero.

andrea said...

You must of had fun