Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, May 30, 2013

200 Words

Taliah was at her favourite restaurant called The Burger Of Death. On the side of the table was a big giant hamburger. “OMG” said Taliah , the burger was so humongous that she couldn't believe her eyes. So Taliah decided to take the burger. So she put it in her bag and vanished out the door.

The police looked at the tapes from the security camera. Suddenly they saw a little girl take the giant hamburger. Then Mark said “Hey, I know that girl she always use to come here. She told me she was just looking at the menu”.
Constable Pete asked “Do you know this little girl”, “yes I do her name is Taliah and she lives on Fourth street number 86” Mark replied.

The police ran out the door and rushed to her house. “Hello, is your daughter home we would like to take her to the courthouse”, “for what” asked Taliah’s mum. “Your daughter stole a giant hamburger from The Burger Of Death” constable Pete said.
“Sorry constable I promise I won’t do it again” Taliah said. “Of course I would and thanks for telling the truth”.

From that day on Taliah promised not to steal again.


Thursday, February 14, 2013

Tech Recount



It was our first week of tech 2013, at Tamaki Collage. It was also the year 7's first time, we got split into three rotations. There was, Graphics, Cooking and Hard Materials  I was in Cooking with Mrs Heka, she was a great cooker.

In Mrs Heka's class we made pizza potatoes  it tasted delicious. First put some potato in the oven with the peel. Next we had to fry the tasty onion in the pan. As it browns, you put in the Mince with the onions. Mix it together until the mince is cooked, when its finished you put in the tomato paste. With the potatoes in the oven take it out, cut it in half and then scoop the potatoes in a bowl, don't through the peels, keep it! Then mash it together, when it has finished being mashed then through in the mince. Mix it together and then scoop it into the peels. When you are finished put it in the oven and also sprinkle some cheese over. Wait for ten minutes and there is you delicious pizza potatoes.

Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Little things can change people lives


A ‘Lollipop  Moment’ is when you put a smile on someone face to cheer them up, or do something really helpful for them. It might turn a persons life and reputation. You can offer to help or ask your parents if you have spare time.

A new girl started at my school. Her name was kimberly, I didn’t really know her that much. She was lonely, so I told her my name and then me and her really became friends. She enjoyed her first day at school and went home with a smile on her face.

The main passage about the story is that little things can be a big difference.

Monday, February 4, 2013

Our Goal's for 2013



A new year and a new start to school. Room 15 year 7/8's had concentrated on our goals for 2013. This movie shows our goals and stuff that we would achieve in this year. Sport is what my high hopes are this year and succeeding in every subject in school. Kimberly, Dante and I had put this movie together and showed our goals for a NEW YEAR 2013!

Monday, December 3, 2012

The end of the year Reflection



Being a year 7 was great! Having a chance to use netbooks instead of book and pencils. What I really enjoyed this year was to spend time with my friends, and also with my teacher Mr Harris while editing my stories. I love room 19 because mostly everyone I know is kind and funny!

ROOM 19 WAS THE BEST!!

Monday, November 26, 2012

My top 2 programmes



My 1st programme on my list is Shortland Street. This show is a drama but is in Auckland and also a really cool programme to me. Mostly all of my family members watch Shortland Street.






My 2nd is Spongebob Squarepants, this cartoon show is really funny. I love it how it's cartoon and I can really understand it.


Monday, November 14, 2011

My Review about Kawau Island




I can’t wait to go to Kawau Island it’s going to be awesome. I am going to be packing my bag with lollies, biscuit and my packed lunch.  I feel really excited and I think it’s going to be fun.



Camp Benzon is where we go camping in Kawau Island and Kawua Island has different Native Species. We are travelling by a fairy and I haven’t been on a fairy before.  



Camp benzon is a very cool place because we get to see Wallabies. There are also cool trees called Kanuka, Manuka and Pohutukawa most native trees. We could look at different native things in Kawau Island.



I’m looking forward to travel in a fairy and play some most awesome activity’s. Because this is my first time to kawau Island with my friends and Helpers. I think that It would be a lot of fun doing my Favorite activity’s.


My challenge is facing people and being confident when I sing a song or Present our concert. I have another challenge as-well it’s facing the world alone and trying my best.


My conclusion is getting there and having fun with my friends and Teachers.

Friday, October 28, 2011

Going to Willow Park!


On the first week of the school holidays I was getting my stuff ready to go to willow park for Riverside. It was my first time going on a camp for riverside. I got to see my friends and join in their group if Mr Burt said. When I got dropped off at school I saw my friends and said hi. When everyone was here we put our bags in the trailer so Mr Clark could drive them down to willow park. When the roll was finished and medicine or money was dropped of to Mrs Hamilton it was time to go. As we hopped on the bus the bus driver drove us to camp. Every girl was excited as the were talking on the bus. I was just relaxing and very happy at myself. Andrea and I were sitting next to each other eating on the bus. Finally we were there and I jumped out of the bus and went to go and run into the hall called the Rimu Room. When we got there we had some activities to do.

We had to get in groups then we had a little chat. After Mr Burt finished chatting he send us to our cabins that our leaders showed us. Then we had to run down and get our bags to put our blankets on our own beds. We had 8 beds in one cabin, Three bunks and Two single beds. When we finished we Relaxed and had a little rest while everyone was playing outside on the trampolines, playground and played volleyball outside. When the SIREN went we had to run to the Rimu Room to do our activity's.

My first favorite highlight was playing with the willow park toys and this was fun. There were so many things, these are the things that we would want to go on Green Machines, Quadbikes, swing trolleys, wobbly bikes and scooters. Out of all of the willow park toys I choose the Green Machines. I loved it because I got to drift inside the gym.

My Second highlight is sleeping. I  love it because I could rest my head and chilax. Now this was a very difficult thing when I try to sleep because it is annoying when people talk too much. At night on the first day when I went to sleep Andrea and Me were eating lollies at night time. After that Andrea and me were told of.  So we went to sleep.

My Third highlight is swimming in the beach and kayaking.  When I dived in the beach I was shivering like a penguin. "Next rotation" said Mr Burt, when Andrea and me was in the kayak I started to rock it and she screamed. Splash! Went the boat I was laughing and Andrea was shouting at me.

EATING is my fourth highlight. I love the food on the first day for lunch we ate hot-dogs and it was delicious.

 I LOVE EATING!

At camp I have learnt that God died for our sins and We Love God. On The Third night I became a follower of Jesus.

Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Rugby 7's Team

Wow! I was so Happy that our 7's Rugby Team won all there games. As we saw the boys we were cheering for them to make them feel proud. They Must of worked hard for a week I thought to myself. Looking around I could tell that my friends and Brother was very excited to see them again. I loved how Rm13 put a movie together and made it funny and Cool. The 7's Rugby Team won all of there Rugby games. You are our Champions!


WELL DONE THE RUGBY SEVENS TEAM!
THE BEST IN THE WORLD!

Wednesday, August 24, 2011

One News!



On Tuesday 23rd August our class had the opportunity to be on One News! My mind was going crazy as they were recording. This was after Lunch in our classroom.
As the lady was talking I moved to another chair. As they left our class my concentration went out of my mind and I went all funny. The lady said that Room 16 would be on One News. I was so amazed and excited. When I went home I didn't have enough time to watch it at 6:00 o'clock.

Thursday, August 11, 2011

Visiting Harold

On Monday the 8th of August we went to visit Harold at the Life Education Caravan. Our whole class was very excited. First thing that we had to do was to take our shoes off and put them under the Caravan so they wouldn't get wet from the horrible weather!

Finally it was time to go into the caravan. I was very excited! Lynn put us into four rows. Then it was time to relax and settle down. We had a little talk to Harold and he asked politely if we could do his homework, because it was a little hard for him to do. So we said, “Yes." We learned all about our body. Tam told us about livers and what it does for us in our body. Did you know that the liver is the size of a small watermelon and has over 500 jobs to do? The liver sorts the food and stores up the Minerals and Vitamins.

When we were talking about our body we heard a strange noise and we looked up and there were lights shinning bright. After that we looked to the right and saw a brain talking to us about where our food goes in our body. Wow that was cool!

Finally it was time to go and we were so sad because we wanted to stay for longer but we couldn’t because it was morning tea time. I can’t wait to go back on Friday!

Friday, August 5, 2011

Immersion Assembly Term 3


Another day for school Hooray! While waiting for school at home I hardly couldn't wait! As I came to school I was excited to see my friends. When school started the whole school went to the hall but room 18, 19, 20, 21 and 22 walked down to Tamaki College for their Tech time. As we went inside the hall we were given a ticket. I was wondering what it was when suddenly Mr burt said that we could use it to buy a treat like a Drink, chips or hot chips and sausages! When the show began we had to watch the teachers dance. At the end we were to that our topic was called 'Keep Your Eye On The Ball'.

My favourite highlight was when the teachers in team 4 got to choose a player so they could feed the teachers weet-bix. Did you know that the All Black players eat 10 Weet-Bix, 2 Litres of milk and a Dozen pieces of toast a Day? I'm not sure if that right!

Tuesday, July 5, 2011

MOTAT Trip



On Thursday 30th June Room 15, 16 and 17 went on an exciting trip to MOTAT. We drove on a bus, it was a very long trip. As we were at MOTAT we met up with a man called Frazer, he showed us many things and took us for a tour. We went to the lunch train right in the middle of Motat.
Tauwhare's sister was a helper, in her group was Tauwhare, Te Rina, Melvin, Tevita and Me.

My favourite highlight is going in the Tactile Dome. It was a mysterious dark room that you can’t even see a thing. When they told us to go I was so scared that I was freaked out, Andrea kept screaming at us. It was challenging as I went through the Tactile Dome. When I was nearly at the end I was crying because Te Rina, Tauwhare and Andrea left me behind and as I got my way out through the exit, I was still crying so my friends hugged me make me feel better.

My second favourite highlight was going in the Mirror Maze, it was hard to get out and I bumped my head while everybody else was running and screaming trying to get out. As I got out I took a deep breath and went through the mirror maze again. I had no clue where I was going. I went on my third time and it was challenging on the way out. On my fourth time I got around it and made it out again, because I practiced, practiced, practiced which makes me perfect at doing it.

Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Emersion Assembly


On the first day of term 2 we had an exciting Emersion Assembly. Our topic for this term is BIGGER, BETTER, STRONGER and FASTER. Suddenly there was a strange and weird noise coming from at the back. Every one at the back of us were wondering who was Darth Vader from Star Wars. It was Louder, Stronger, Bigger and Better. As it came in to the Hall we knew who it was. It was our Principal Mr Burt wearing a suit that was Darth Vader and a Mask as-well.

Suddenly the show began, each team had to stand up and performed about our topic for this term. First team was Team 1. Looking in the lunchbox was yummy, healthy food to eat. The team one teachers got out the yummy, healthy food and shared it with us. As it came to our side Dante tasted the sandwich, she said it tasted nice. I wanted one because she said it tasted nice. When that show finished it was time for team 2.

Team 2 had a funny show, how to make things better then boring things . When there was a funny noise it was a song that was cool. After that the magician was dancing which made it funny. They went to get things out of a rubbish bin and put it in a magician machine. The part that I liked was when they pulled out a normal hat out of a rubbish bin and they put it in their magical machine and out came a cool hat. I was shocked.

Next was team 3. Their team were alright to me, but I really need to wash my hand, Nah just joking! Miss Walters was funny the way she danced. Here comes the water spreading everywhere, they were very clever.

It was time for my favorite team it was team 4 especially Mr Somerville and Mr Marks. Mr Somerville used a power duster out of a drill. Looking at Mr Marks powerful robot arms would take lots of work at making it with cardboard.

Wow that was a great show on things that are Bigger, Better, Faster and Stronger.

Monday, May 16, 2011

The Tallest Tower

What an exciting day on term 2 we had to build towers out of thin papers. We had the opportunity to work together or we could work alone. As the competition began our equipment was nine pieces of paper, a strip of sellotape, scissors and glue.

I was sweltering because I had no way to make a tower out of my equipment that I got. Suddenly I had an idea. As I was working (trying to get it right) it got messed up, because it was getting windy outside. I was trying to work something in my mind. So I worked hard trying to get it right to make it Bigger, Better, Faster and Stronger. My partner was myself because I wanted to work alone. It was hard with everyone screaming. trying to figure out a way to make a tower.

I have been studying ways to build a paper tower out of paper and make bridge out of straw. We had to use triangles to make the tower Bigger, Better, Stronger and Faster. I think our topic so far is alright to me. I love studying about inventions so far.


Tuesday, May 3, 2011

My favorite Milkshake


My favorite Milkshake is chocolate. It has lots of flavor that you can't even make it. Just imagining that you have one and you won't share it with your brothers, dad or mum even your cousins. After that I begged my mum to to buy me a chocolate milkshake. So she did so she could calm me down.

As I finished drinking it was time to go home because it was getting dark and it was also cold. When we got home I jumped straight into bed and waited to have a new beginning for tomorrow.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

My favorite song


My favorite song is Price Tag because it is simple to other songs. I love it because we did it for our camp concert and I thought to myself that it is amazing and cool. I think that our dance to my favorite song is cool and hot. Dancing to it in front of my parents and other people I was frustrated.

I THINK MY FAVORITE SONG IS HOT. Click on the picture of Jessie J where I got the photo from.

Tuesday, April 12, 2011

My Dinosaur Story

Million Years ago in Dinosaur world was a Dinosaur called Brachiosaurus who had a baby, it was a beautiful girl. Brachiosaurus was a stegosaurus that was huge, it lived about 145 to 150 million years ago. Brachiosaurus lives were hard, even with her family. She lived in the forest with a million other Dinosaurs. She had plates and armour which protects her and her family. As she was getting older and her baby was getting bigger. Her mum died when her baby was a ten year old. Her name was Dilophosaurus as she was sixteen she find her own house in wellington with her dad.

One hot sunny day when Dilophosaurus went out shopping people were scared of her she wondered to her self why am I so scary. Until she heard ahhhhhhh it’s a Dinosaur a real Dinosaur she looked at herself ‘oh’ I said ‘I am a Dinosaur’. As people were screaming their lungs out a loud voice was heard I looked out and it was big. She got her phone and rang her dad, when her dad picked up the phone they started talking on the phone. She was talking fast so her dad didn’t understand and her dad asked to “slow down her voice”, and she said ‘THERE IS SOMETHING BIG AND HUMONGOUS’, Then her dad said ‘I am coming hold up’ then he ran and hanged up the phone. Dilophosaurus was shocked and nearly had a hard-attack. As her dad was here the fight started.

As they were fighting Dilophosaurus dad who was called Allosaurus started pumping blood in his Armor and plates witch was beaming. With a whack the T-Rex went to the floor so hard. After that Dilophosaurus was on her way leaving she was starving all she ate was water and leaves she was a vegetarian. As she said to her self wow that was a big and exhausted day for me. As her dad came in he came in with a big smile.

The disaster in japan.


In japan their was a 8.9 tsunami that caused lot's of damage and was very dangerous. People were so scared about what they heard on their television. As we heard it as-well we were worried about them, seeing the look at our faces. Then when we saw the tsunami coming in, it damaged houses people were driving in their cars but there was no way to get out because it was a island.

As the tsunami was finished it struck lot's of damage and everything was swept away and the island was damaged so hard that each building were collapse on the japan people.
Bless all those how is damaged, hurt and maybe dead.

Monday, April 11, 2011

All about me.

Click on these photo's to see were I got the photo's from.


Hi my name is Turuhira and I am a year 6 student, I am 10 year old. My best friend is Anahera
But she is in a different class, me and her were best buddies when she started school. We always hanged out every lunchtime and morning tea. I am in Room16 My teachers name is Mr Somerville He started learning at our school this year but he is not going to stay here for long because he is going to leave school next year.

This year my goal for writing is making my paragraphs interesting.
Why- So people can say "Wow what interesting pargraphs" Thats why.

I am taking charge at looking after my responsibillity and my belongings.
My topic for this year is being kind to ohters like being respect to everyone.

This year so far is awsome even my teacher. Our teacher has been so kind to us like we had been respectful to him.

Here is some photo's of our class here is my funny teacher.